Good work Jasmine, this is very creative, I can see you have related your story to Dr Who. You can go back and edit the title to story if you want. Next time, are you able to add in more writing? Or could you create a sequel?
Nice job Jasmine. I like the way you moved the Tardis across the page. Were there any stars? You did a great job. Sometimes I think most of us would like to borrow a tardis for a while.
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ReplyDeleteGood work Jasmine, this is very creative, I can see you have related your story to Dr Who. You can go back and edit the title to story if you want. Next time, are you able to add in more writing? Or could you create a sequel?
ReplyDeleteI should add a part two and make it into a series ms.watts that will help me make more of it!
ReplyDeleteNice job Jasmine. I like the way you moved the Tardis across the page. Were there any stars? You did a great job. Sometimes I think most of us would like to borrow a tardis for a while.
ReplyDeleteThanks More parts will come soon!
DeleteHi Jasmine, This Post about doctor whos time machine is really cool. you must of worked really hard for this.
ReplyDeleteNice work!!